I had the chance to share Concrete Sound Experiment 2 this week. I have not shown work to peers for criticism in some time, the feedback that there needs to be more progression was useful. In comparison other work showed the power of more space, stripping back the sounds letting then have room to be heard individually.

I am going to rewatch the Walter Murch crowd sequence video as I still want to produce a very dense soundscape but need more dynamics to help reveal that density rather than it sounding muddy..

A number of commenters noted that the rhythm of the clocks was lost so I need to clarify this as I feel this is the main element I want to achieve with the piece, drawing attention to the passing of time.